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今日は! 今日は,ナイルです。 久しぶりITALKIが使いませんでしたでも私の日本語が現在進みましょう。 私の日本語は悪いです。。。お手伝いください。

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今日は!

今日は,。ナイルです。
久しぶりITALKIが使いませんでした→久しぶりにitalkiを使います。/長いことitalkiを使いませんでした。

でも私の日本語が現在進みましょう。→?でも私の日本語はこれから良くなるでしょう。
(今の)私の日本語は悪いだめです。。。お手伝いください。※You can say "My Japanese is bad" in English. But we do not say 私の日本語/英語は悪いです. We say 私の日本語は駄目<だめ/ダメ>です/まだまだです。or 私は日本語が下手<へた>です。

 

※I do not undersand "久しぶりITALKIが使いませんでしたでも私の日本語が現在進みましょう。". English would be helpful.

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※There is not a message box on your page. So I will write here.
This correction site is intended to have other people correct errors of the Japanese sentence that you wrote. It is not the thing which you end up by being satisfied with your writing. The person to correct corrects it hard. At least I am so. The expense is not caused there. It is a volunteer. It is courtesy that the person who contributed the original gives thanks for the person who corrected. You may not feel good that a lot of things which you wrote are corrected. However, it is what you should be rather pleased with. Because your Japanese becomes better (more natural) and it's useful for you. You showed no reaction to the next article which I corrected. I am interested whether my correction was helpful for you. I will be happy if I will be able to get your reply.

http://www.italki.com/entry/625333(this page)

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手伝いますよ!

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