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My pets I very like animals. And my children love dogs. However I can't get a dog because it needs to walk in any weather. Children will not walk with dog. So when my daugther was ninth birtday I bought a little cat. It call Kisson. He has love to play with bowl and jalousie .He has always eaten too food and now my cat weighs 8 killos.

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My pets

I really like animals. And my children love dogs. However I can't get a dog because it needs to be taken for a walk in any weather. My children will not walk with a dog. So when my daughter had her ninth birthday, I bought a little cat. It is called Kisson. He loves to play with his bowl and the blinds. He has always eaten too much food and now my cat weighs 8 kilos!

 

Hello Elena,

I hope your cat is not still climbing the blinds!

Just a few mistakes. The first one is a really common mistake for learners from this part of the world because it is a literal translation. The best way raound it is to use 'really' instead of 'very' then you don't need to change the rest of the word order. I am certain that 'jalousie' in Ukrainian is 'blind' - it may be an idea to double check on google translate.

 

Hope this helps

 

Bob

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