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snow today Today,it got the first snow this year in Beijing.I get out my apartment,and sow everyone was taking an umbrella.It snow very hard. Then I got into the subway. I think because of the weather,so muny people are waiting for subway.when I arrived at my work place ,got off the subway,and feel the road was very terrible .when you step on on it it it will split up with worter which melt by snow. Good day start:)

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snow today

Today, it got the first snow it snowed for the firs time this year in Beijing. I get got out my apartment,and sow saw everyone was taking an umbrella. It snow very hard. Then, I got into the subway. I think, because of the weather, so many people are waiting for the subway. When I arrived at my work place, got getting off the subway, and feel I felt the road was very terrible. When you stepped on on it, it will split up with worter water which melt by snow. Good day start:)

 

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