I need to learn and speak English ^^

I'm from Venezuela. I have spent five months (the last five months) learning English, but I need to practice it. I do not write or speak it well, and I can hardly make sentences, but I'm trying. I'd like to use it in my profession and for travelling to English-speaking countries.

Your discourse was short but understandable in English.  Nicely done!

I made a few changes to add some ideas.  When you write "I have spent five months learning English", the time frame is not clear.  When did you spend five months learning English?  Without telling the reader when, it can seem unclear.  By that I mean... was it the last five months? Was it five months that you spent learning English in school?  Was it last year?

I need to learn and speak English ^^

I'm from Venezuela. I have spent five months learning English, but I need to practice it. I do not write or speak it well, and I can hardly make sentences, but I'm trying. I'd like to use it in my profession and to travel in to (to - a/para, in/on-en)other s countries. 

Muy bien amiga, solamente sigue así. 

Si necesitas ayuda, puedes contar conmigo. 

¡Que tengas un día genial!

I need to learn and speak English ^^

I'm from Venezuela. I have spent five months learning English, but I need to practice it. I do not write or speak it well, and I can hardly make sentences, but I'm trying. I'd like to use it in my profession and to travel to others countries.

This short text is, in fact, quite well-written. Good luck in your search!