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my best friend Im really have one best friend.I went to the Capital for 4 years to learn and work then I met her she live near my room. At first time Im so shy and speak to her sometime not often but day by day I see she very friendly we often eating , chatting, having fun together. we are laughter and happy without trouble. we often talk a bout our family, when I sick she care about me alot I feel thank for her. I very happy until she has got her boyfriend she forget me alot. Now we dont keep in touch each other. she exchange her phone number but dont telle

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my best friend

Im really have only one best friend. I went to the capital for 4 years to learn go to school and to work, then I met her my friend because she lived near my dorm room. At first, time Im I was so shy and did not speak to her sometime not often, but day by day I seesaw that she was very friendly and we would often eating , chatting, and haveing fun together. We are laughter laughed and were happy without trouble. We often talked about our families, and when I was sick, she cared about me alot. I felt grateful thank for her. I was very happy until she has got her boyfriend, then she forgot me alot. Now, we don't keep in touch with each other. She exchanged her phone number but she doesn't call. dont telle



You need to be sure to use all past tense verbs when talking about the past.  It's really hard to understand otherwise.  Good luck!

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