Yes, friends, autumn definitely has come into our lives, and for a good moment will remain. Rainy days, cold days and a few days where you don’t even feel like leaving the house. But, the biggest joy of the season has also arrived - endless opportunities for your looks. Scarves, caps, jackets and much more. Autumn is the perfect season to let your imagination flow and to use your clothes, not only to wrap yourself up, but also to obtain perfect style.

My recommendations? Very free clothing, like silk blouses and shirts, combined with military-style jackets (add a touch of color to reduce seriousness). The key article of the season - the fedora. It’s always a good choice to add that extra bit of elegance to your image. And you can once again add black stockings to your wardrobe, even with the cold, they will continue to show-off your legs! Another tip - add a bit of sheen to your night outfits.

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My recommendations? Very free loose articles, even of silk, such as blouses and shirts, combined with military-style jackets of military air,. a A touch of color to reduces seriousness, and the key article of this season, the fedora, that adds many much [Use much for "non-countable" objects, and many for "countable" objects.] elegance and [safety][The meaning is not clear.] to your image. [Ah¡¡,][The meaning is not clear.], and once again [the black stockings turns to, even with the cold, we could continue illuminating our legs][Unclear.] 
An piece of advice [Or: a word of advice?]? [adds up a bit of sheen for your night outfits][Unclear.]

Notes:

1. Interesting topic -- I know nothing about fashion!

2. You have many incomplete sentences. Complete sentences require subject + verb. In casual writing, having a couple incomplete sentences here and there is fine. But in more formal writing, the expectation is that the sentences will be complete. My suggestion, for now, is that you focus on making sure each sentence is a complete sentence.

3. There are some usage questions, too. Don't worry about those. You are doing your best to find the right words, probably by using a dictionary, and that is how we all start. As you keep practicing, you will see more and more which words sound natural.

Keep going!