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about my part time job
I'm going to write down a little bit about my part time job.
I'm a staff member at a cafe and the jobs are like serving drinks or food, being a cashier, doing dishes and so on.
My workplace is always busy, especially in the afternoon, and for some reason many elderly people come there.
The cafe is open from 9 am to 8 pm. After 5 pm, the numbers of customers is relatively low, which is helpful for me because I can talk with coworkers at that time.
The cafe has separate areas for smokers or non-smokers but I think it's useless because the smoke can easily fly to another area.
I've heard that people can't smoke in the building or at the store in foreign countries. Actually I prefer it.
thx for reading.
hehe yuma, you know I will correct your essay to make it look fancy and formal :p
sorry hehe
about my part time job
I'm going to write down a little bit about my part time job.
I am going to write down a little bit about my part time job.
I'm a staff member at a cafe and the jobs are like serving drinks or food, being a cashier, doing dishes and so on.
I am a staff member at a cafe. I do a number of jobs such as serving drinks or/and food, handling the till and washing the dishes.
My workplace is always busy, especially in afternoon, and somehow many elderly people come there.
My workplace is always busy, especially during afternoons. Somehow, most of the customers we recieve are the elderlies.
The cafe is open from 9 am to 8 pm. After 5 pm, the numbers of customers is relatively low, which is helpful for me because I can talk with coworkers at that time.
The cafe opens from 9am up to 8pm. (The cafe opens at 9am and shuts at 8pm). After 5pm, less customers patrons the cafe and this would mean I get the opportunity to have a chat with my co-workers freely.
The cafe has separate areas for smoking or non-smorkers but i think it's useless because the smoke easily can fly to another area.
The cafe has seperate areas for smokers and non smokers. However, I think this is useless because the smoke spreads to the other area..
I've heard that people can't smoke in the building or at the store in foreign countries. Actually i prefer it.
I heard that in foreign countries, smoking is restricted indoors of public buildings.
thx for reading.
Thanks for reading.
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