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whether should we help those in need ( I need someone to correct my mietakes in thie passage) There is a special phenomenon in China. An old lady is lying on the ground, and the passers-by are all hesitating whether to offer help or not. They are afraid that it may cause problem on themselves. On my point of view, there are tow main reasons that lead to this phenomenon. For one thing, there exactly are some people who want to cheat money from those who help them, so that most of the people don't want to help them at once, For another, with the pressure of city life, a large amount people think that time is money, so they care more about themselves than others. Don't realize to help strangers. However, as we all know,helping others is our traditional virtue, we should carry on this virtue. Of course, we should improve our risk-conscious so as not to be cheated.

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whether should we help those in need ( I need someone to correct my mistakes in thie passage)

There is a special phenomenon in China. An old lady is lying on the ground, and the passers-by are all hesitating whether to offer help or not. They are afraid that it may causes problem to themselves.
On my point of view, there are two main reasons that lead to this phenomenon. For one thing, there exactly are some people who want to steal money from those who help them, so that most of the people don't want to help them at once, For another, with the pressure of city life, a large amount people think that time is money, so they care more about themselves than others. Don't realize to help strangers.
However, as we all know,helping others is our traditional virtue, we should carry on this virtue. Of course, we should improve our risk-conscious so as not to be cheated.

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