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Airplane accident Is it only me feeling that aviation accident often occurs in past few years? It's more than sad and, to tell the truth, making me feel hesitation to travel by plane after the bid accident. Ok I know, generally it says the travelling airplane is safe comparing to other vehicles such as car or bus, or people may say look at the accident rate of airplane or total number of casualties between car and airplane. But I can't saying that the airplane is the one of safest vehicle after watching a accident photos.

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Airplane accident

Is it only me feeling that aviation accidents occur more often in the past few years? It's more than sad and, to tell the truth, making me feel hesitation to travel by plane after the bad accident. Ok I know, generally people say that travelling by airplane is safe compared to other vehicles such as car or bus, or people may say look at the accident rate of airplanes or total number of casualties between car and airplane. But I can't saying that the airplane is the one of safest vehicles after looking at the accident photos.

 

Hello Hide,

 

When a plane crashes normally there are no survivors and the fatalities are normally about 200. It will always make the news and there is always an inquiry. This weekend, in our country alone, 30 people have been killed on the roads but it doesn't make the international headlines because it is normally in ones and twos.

 

There is also a suggestion that this latest accident may not have been an accident.

 

I think that although it is terribly sad when accidents do occur, planes are still by far the safest way to travel.

Just a few small mistakes in your writing, nut I can understand everything without problem.

 

Hope this helps

 

Bob

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Is it only me (feeling/who feels/who thinks) that aviation accidents has occured more often in the past few years?

It's (more than sad/devastating) and, to tell the truth, it makes me (feel hesitation hesitant/hesitate) to travel by plane after the big/last accident. Ok you maily say 'ok' while talking perhaps when you need a second to think, but there's no need for it while writing; however, it's not incorrect and it's up to you to keep using it or not.


I know, generally it says they say (traveling airplanes/airliners <=just a better suggestion --- you're talking generally, so it's best to use plural nouns) are safe comparing to other vehicles such as cars or buses, (or/while) people may say,


"look at the accident rate of airplanes or the total number of casualties of cars and that of airplanes" by this you guarantee that the reader understands that people ask you to look at the number of casualties of cars and number of casualties of airplanes, and that is for the purpose of comparison.

But I can't saying that the airplane is one of safest vehicles/transportation methods after watching photos of the recent accident.


I hope my notes benefited you. You've done well, using an interesting topic. Keep writing!!

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