Hi, it's Jayden from China. I'd like to be language partners on italki. I'm crazy about English novels. And I really want to improve my English reading and writing skills.I can teach you Chinese, which is my mother tongue. My QQ: 1097578246；If you want to be friends with me, we could chat by QQ, which is a kind of Instant Message software. You can download QQ from the net. Or do you use Skype? If so, what's your Skype ID? My Skype ID: Kianick12; My Wechat: 18721732274; Hope to hear from you. :D

Firstly,i feel happy that you are learning Chinese(madarin),because i love it so much.Following are some corrections and my explanations,hope have the help to u. 1.The difference between "我今天早上十点半起床"and"今天早上我十点半起床". In most conditions,the more important what u want to highlight is priority in location.So,although these two sentences are describe the same thing,there are slightly different. "我今天早上十点半起床"is describe your life,bias towards "you" and "your life",just like sharing your life.But"今天早上十点半我起床"is more likely that you are describing your schedule,the point of the sentence is the time(今天早上十点半）,it seems that you just want to tell us what things you are doing in half past ten. 2.About"然后" I get that this word appears three times,and it will be better to replace it with"之后"or"后来",etc.I mean it's ok to just replace one or two,as long as is not only a word to express the same meaning. "然后","之后","后来"all can be used to express the meaning of "after that"or"then".Besides,u can use punctuation mark--"，"after"然后","之后","后来",for the sake of pause.example:"然后我跟我的狗一起绕着公园跑了五公里",this sentence is a bit long to read,and u can take modification,"然后，我跟我的狗一起绕着公园跑了五公里". 3."联系"is contact,"练习"is practice. 4."现在我去上班"and"现在我要去上班" If you want to tell us u are at work,it should be"现在我在上班".But if you mean to say you are going to work,it's absolutely right to say"现在我去上班"."现在我要去上班",is commonly sayed with means that i NEED to go to work now."现在我该去上班",is say that i SHOULD go to work. 5."然后"和"最后"（like "then"and"finally"or"at last"） My English is not so good,please forgive me.And message me if u have any question in Chinese learning,i will be happy and try my best.It couldn't be better that you give me some corrections about my English.Thks a lot. My e-mial:[email protected] U can call me sophie or my Chinese name 肖慧（xiao hui）.