hello，this is my assignment,can you make its word more genuine and advanced？

Half a year ago, I was busy in studying with high school courses and doing some reviews. At the same time, I was also confused as to what it my life looks like in the future. Which What type of people person will I become? Actually I have no idea at all. Anyway, things which is coming will come sooner or later.
When I first arrived at college, I can't couldn't believe the scenery in front of my eyes. It is was so exciting for me to become a freshman. I can could get rid of my parents, enjoy a brand new lifestyle, and even sleep till nine and don't have to study around the clock. It is was a chance for me to get more and grow up. Hundreds of opportunities and activities surrounded me. The way to the future is was promising.
But then I feel felt a little upset. It doesn't didn't seem that everything goes went as well as I expecting had expected. Various annoyances come came to me. At the beginning, I am was busy with finishing plenty of work, therefore I even have had no time to study quietly. Then, it is was difficult for me to adapt to another custom and climate, which when the place is two thousands kilometers far away from my hometown. Furthermore there was a sort of homesickness around me every all the time especially when I see saw some food and scenery of my home come up at on WeChat-connect. [or you can also say "especially when some food and scenery of my home come up on WeChat-connect."]
Now I try to adapt to it. Anyway, things changed. People only Only people who changed themselves can be alive.

Good! Some notes:

- Remember to put spaces after commas.

- Also, when you are telling a story about what happened in the past, use the past tense.