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1st november I work in a clothes shop. The day started with good music in my work in the morning. I finished work, I have gone to church. Today it was a sunny day, where I went to visit a friend who she works inside the mall. She works in an ice cream stand. Then I ordered a hot chocolate and a waffle with two scoops of ice cream. We were talking we had plans to celebrate the new year and we talked about our next holiday. I stayed home in the afternoon, where I have been watching some movies.

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1st november

I work in a clothes shop. The day started with good music AT work in the morning. I finished work, (THEN) I WENT to church. Today was a sunny day, I went to visit a friend who works in the mall.

She works ON or AT an ice cream stand.  I ordered a hot chocolate and a waffle with two scoops of ice cream.
We were talking; we had plans to celebrate the new year and we talked about our next holiday.
I stayed home in the afternoon, AND WATCHED (where I have been watching) some movies.

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1st november

I work in a clothes shop✅. The day started with good music in my  work in the morning. I finished work, I have gone to church then i went to church. 

Today it was a sunny day. where I went to visit a friend who she works inside the mall. 

She works in an ice cream stand✅. Then I ordered a hot chocolate and a waffle with two scoops of ice cream✅.
We were talking, we had plans to celebrate the new year and we talked about our next holiday.✅ 
I stayed home in the afternoon, where I have been watching some movies.✅

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1st november

I work in a clothes shop. The day started with good music in my work in the morning. I finished work, I went  to church. Today it was a sunny day.  I also  went to visit a friend who she works inside the mall.

She works on an ice cream stand. Then I ordered a hot chocolate and a waffle with two scoops of ice cream.
We were talking  about our  plans to celebrate the new year and we talked about our next holiday.
I stayed home in the afternoon, where I have been watching some movies.

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