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about my dog and about my dream. I have a dog. He name is King.haha That's so funny. He looks not king.looks bear or mop. He is 9 years old. He is mild,smart, and so considerate.(←I used dictionary.) When I was cry.Then He always sit down by my side. He makes me smile and happy. My dream is help for many dogs. I want to repay for King and all of Dogs. I want to founding the dog shelter. because dog shelter is not much in Japan. I do volunteer for shelter dogs 7years. I will keep doing that. this picture is King in Osaka catsle. if you find a mistake in my notebook,would you correct it? thank you for your reading!

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About my Dog and about my Dream.

I have a dog.
He His name is King.  haha
That's so funny.
He looks not king*.  He looks like a bear or a mop !    *He doesn't look like a king
He is 9 years old.
He is well-behaved/even-tempered/[mild],smart, and so thoughtful/considerate.(←I used dictionary.)
When I was am crying, (then) he always sits (down) by my side.
He makes me smile and feel happy.
My dream is to help for a lot of/many dogs.
I want to repay for King and all of (other) dogs.
I want to set up/founding the a dog shelter.
because there are not many dog shelters is not much in Japan.
I [do]*/have been doing volunteer work for the shelter for dogs for 7 years.
I will keep doing that.

This picture is of King in/at Osaka castle.

*When you mention the length of time that you have been doing voluntary work at the dog shelter [7 years] you should use the 'present perfect continuous' : 'I have been doing', rather than the present  'I do'.  If you do not mention the 7 years, then use the present tense.


If you find a mistake in my notebook,would you correct it?
thank you for your reading!

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about my dog and about my dream.

I have a dog.
His name is King.haha
That's so funny because He doesn't look like a king at all. He looks like a bear or mop.
He is 9 years old.
He is mild,smart, and so considerate.(←I used dictionary.)
When I'm crying, He always sits down by my side.
He makes me smile and be happy.
My dream is to help as many dogs as possible.
I want to repay King and all of the Dogs.
I want to establish a dog shelter because there are not many dog shelters in Japan.
I have done volunteer work for shelter dogs for the last 7years and I will keep doing that.

this picture is King in Osaka catsle.


if you find a mistake in my notebook,would you correct it?
thank you for your reading!

 

This is the natural way to say it. Good luck with helping the poor dogs! :)

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about my dog and about my dream.

I have a dog.
His name is King.haha
That's so funny.
He looks like  king and got  bear or mop.
He is 9 years old.
He is mild,smart, and so considerate.(←I used dictionary.)
When I  cry. He always sit down by my side.
He makes me smile and happy.
My dream is to help  many dogs.
I want to repay for King and all of Dogs.
I want to fund the dog shelter.
because dog shelter are not much in Japan.
I do volunteer for shelters for  dogs from 7years.
I will keep doing that.

this picture is King in Osaka catsle.


if you find a mistake in my notebook,would you correct it?
thank you for your reading!

1

about my dog and about my dream.

I have a dog.
His name is King.haha
That's so funny.
He looks not king.looks like a bear or mop.
He is 9 years old.
He is mild,smart, and so considerate.(←I used dictionary.)
When I was cryinh He always sat down by my side.
He makes me smile and happy.
My dream is to help for many dogs.
I want to repay for King and all of Dogs.
I want to found the dog shelter.
because there are  not much dog shelters in Japan.
I do volunteer for shelter dogs 7years.
I will keep doing that.

this picture is King in Osaka catsle.


if you find a mistake in my notebook,would you correct it?
thank you for your reading!

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about my dog and about my dream.

I have a dog.
He name is King.haha
That's so funny.
He looks not king.looks bear or mop.
He is 9 years old.
He is mild,smart, and so considerate.(←I used dictionary.)
When I was cry.Then He always sit down by my side.
He makes me smile and happy.
My dream is help for many dogs.
I want to repay for King and all of Dogs.
I want to founding the dog shelter.
because dog shelter is not much in Japan.
I do volunteer for shelter dogs 7years.
I will keep doing that.

this picture is King in Osaka catsle.


if you find a mistake in my notebook,would you correct it?
thank you for your reading!

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