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Dear Jack,

It has been a long time since we met, how are you getting along these days? I am writing to give you some bad news. I am sorry that I can't come to Thailand to visit you tomorrow. Due to the holiday season, the train tickets are fully booked so I have no way of getting the ticket. What's worse, the plane tickets are also fully booked. But think nothing of it. I have booked a train ticket for the next day and we will meet soon.Please give my regards to your parents!

All the best

Leon

Hello Leon,

Nice letter which explains the situation well. Just a few small mistakes - we normally give someone news (and news  is uncountable so you can't have 'a news'!) We normally use the expression ' no way of + verbing'. At the end you used 'Yours sincerely' this is from a formal letter and you would not usually use it in a letter to a friend.

Hope this helps

Bob

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Dear Jack,
It has been a long time since we met, how are you getting along these days? I am writing to with bad news. tell you a bad massage. I am sorry that I can't go come to Thailand to visit you tomorrow. Due to the holiday season, the train is tickets are fully booked, so I have no way to get a the ticket.What's worse is that the planes tickets are also fully booked. But don't worry,  think nothing of it. I have booked the a train ticket for the following of next day and we will meet soon. Please give my regards to your parents!

Yours sincerely,
Leon

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Dear Jack,
It has been a long time since we met, how are you getting along these days? I am writing to tell you a bad news. I am sorry that I can't go to Thailand to visit you tomorrow. Due to holiday season, train tickets are fully booked so I have no way to get the ticket.What's worse,the plane tickets are also fully booked. But think nothing of it.I have booked the train ticket of next day and we will meet soon.Please give my regards to your parents!

Yours sincerely
Leon