Halloween!!

Today was Halloween, so I wore a Hogwarts costume.
I went to a Halloween karaoke party with my 2 English teachers and some friends. We sang many English songs for 2 hours. It was great fun. I enjoyed the time.
After that, I went to a British pub in Japan with the teacher and 2 friends. It was first time I have ever been  to a pub. I'm 18 years old, so we drank non-alcoholic beverages. However, my teacher drank 2 beers. We ate fish & chips; and camembert cheese chicken. It was so good, I will go again with my friend.
Happy Halloween!!

Hello 那奈,

It sounds like you had a great time! Just a few small corrections. For experiences (not) in your like you should use the present perfect "have/has + past participle". Also 'very' doesn't go with 'fun' - It is better to say great fun.

Hope this helps

Bob

You are doing really well! 

Keep up the good work!

Halloween!!

Today was Halloween, so I wore a Hogwarts costume.
I went to a Halloween karaoke party with my two English teachers and some friends.

We sang many English song for two hours. It was very fun. I enjoyed the time.
After that, I went to British pub in Japan with the teacher and two friends. It was first time for me to go to a pub. I'm eighteen years old, so we drank non-alcohol beverages. However, my teacher drank two beers. We ate fish and chips and camembert cheese chicken. It was so good. I will go again with my friend.
Happy Halloween!!