The Tree

When I was a boy, I usually would always climb on a the tree in front of my house, which was planted by my father when he was young.The tree has 25 years old so far The tree is 25 years old to date. But last month,a violent typhoon attacked my hometown and destroyed everything.When I arrived back to my hometown,I can't couldn't believe my eyes. mostly trees were killed by typhoon The typhoon had killed almost all the trees,including the onewhich grew up with me and witnessed my childhood one I grew up with/ including the one from my childhood.What a pity! It left me forever It's gone forever!

Sad story :c But great work with the English ^-^ Just be careful with your tenses. I hope you find this correction helpful!

The Tree

When I was a boy, I usually climbed(I used to climb) on a tree in front of my house,  which had been planted by my father when he had been young.The tree is 25 years old so far.But last month,a violent typhoon attacked my hometown and destroyed everyting.When I arrived to my hometown,I couldn't believe my eyes,most  trees were killed by typhoon,including which grew up with me and witnessed my childhood one.What a pity! It left me forever!