我累了。。

我今天的工作了十二鐘頭。 我還生病了。 現在，我在家， 跟我的妹妹和狗在一起。I'm not sure if I've said this properly. I'm very, very new with learning Chinese. I tried to say. "I'm very tired. I've worked for 12 hours today, I'm also sick. Now, I'm home with my sister and dog. "

我累了。。

我累了。。

"I'm very tired. I've worked for 12 hours today, I'm also sick. Now, I'm home with my sister and dog. "

i'll try to say:

我好累呀。

我今天工作了12個鐘頭，而且我已經生病，終於可以在家裡陪著我妹妹和小狗.

"I'm very tired. I've worked for 12 hours today, I'm also sick. Now, I'm home with my sister and dog."

My edition:

真累！我今天上了 12小時的班，也生了病，現在跟妹妹和小狗在家。(Traditional Chinese)

真累！我今天上了 12小时的班，也生了病，现在跟妹妹和小狗在家。(Simplified Chinese)