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nota 4 English
I'm Paola, I'm twenty-four years old and I'm from Venezuela. I live in Caracas and I like doing exercise for example going to the mountain. I work in the "Hospital Ortopedico Infantil". I like traveling in my country, I think it is beautiful. I went to "La Gran Sabana" and I was really impressed, it's a magical site. There are waterfalls, really beautiful and I met people who are special to me. I went to "La Gran Sabana" four years ago. I met my boyfriend there. His name is Michel and now he lives in Montreal, a long way from Caracas jaja. Montreal, for me, is nice. It's reality for Venezuelans. It's sad but right now every month. we say goodbye to a friend. My story still continues but it's the reason I can't write an "autobiography".
I like to learn languages, it is very interesting for me, I speak French, I practise on "italki" I speak with people from France and Belgium. I live with my parents, my sister and my little baby, her name is Isabella and I love her. She is very smart. She is one year old and she loves eating, dancing and playing with the dogs and cats and she repeats everything you say. I’m committed to teaching her French and English. I listen to music in English with her and we watch videos in English for the numbers and the colors.
Hello Paola,
A nice long introduction about yourself. English grammar is quite similar sometimes to French grammar so that should help you with learning English. Try not to make your sentences too long - break them up or it sounds like you are speaking in a rush and it can sometimes be difficult to follow. Please remember that in English, you should use a capital (big) I in front of verbs.
Hope this helps
Bob
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