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Happy birthday to me! yesterday was my birthday,20th birthday.i went out with my friends for dinner and bought a big delicious cheese cake to celebrate it.Be honest,i felt a little fear to be a twenty girl,because the "2"age is different with the "1"age,it is meaning i'm not a teenager but completely a adult who have to face everything by myself and be responsible to everything i have done.But i feel better now.I'm happy to welcome a new phase in my life and sure that i can be good.right? (My english is poor so if u can alter my essay,i will very happy and feel grateful .so help me please,thanks a lot!)

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Some minor corrections. The English in this message is definitely very good. Very easy to correct such small things.


Happy birthday to me!

Yesterday was my birthday, my 20th birthday. I went out with my friends for dinner and bought a big, delicious cheese cake to celebrate it. To be honest, I felt a little fear to be a twenty year-old girl, because the "2" age is different to the "1" age. It means I'm not a teenager but completely an adult who has to face everything by myself and be responsible to everything I have done. But I feel better now. I'm happy to welcome a new phase in my life and sure that I can do well. Right?

(My english is poor, so if u can alter my essay, I will be very happy and feel grateful. So help me, please. Thanks a lot!)
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raydenver is right !! your english is excellent !! :O hahah happy Bday btw !! \o\ xP
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his English is excellent, congratulate you for your birthday and for his desenpenho and interest in a language that is very nice to learn ...

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