The happiness(Happiness)

Is the money  or (Is the money going to make you happy?) Can money make you happy?
Alot of people think is the main path to achieve the happiness is the money; and without it you can't be happy in your life. In my opinion, the money it's(is)necessary;but  not everything. You can't be happy with the money only. Because we are a humans, and social -  we need to achieve the happiness the; family and friends. We need to  live in the association( what association? )... And in the otherwise  (in other words) we have a soul so we need religion, love, sentiment.....

Your topic is clear, but your reasoning is sloppy. Good work though. 

The happiness

Is the Can money can make you happy?
A lot of people think is the main path to achieve the happiness is the money and without it you can't be happy in your life. In my opinion the money it's is necessary but it is not everything, you can't be happy with the money alone only. Because we are a humans and social beings, so we need to achieve the happiness in the way of family and friends. We need to live in harmony association... And Also in the otherwise we have a soul so we need religion, love, sentiment.....