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MY FIRST YEAR IN UK Hello everyone. Well, now I'm going to explain my expierence in UK. I'm cyclist and ride to right it's a bit difficult if you come from Spain. So, first days were difficult, especially in the junctions. I travelled around UK (Durham, Wales, Glasgow, Portsmouth, Notts, Barrow...) for compete, and We moved with van,,, English motorways were stressful and slow, but we played "Eddie Stobar game" and the trip was more fun. Costa Coffe! Can you say me a place without Costa? Everywhere!! For this reason I went back to Spain addicted to the Americano. And Tea, of course ;) And I discovered the Porridge, Oh God, best breakfast for an athlete. I lived in Plymouth (Devon), so beautiful place. I trained in Dartmoor Park or close to the sea. Well, and the most difficult thing is the language.I improved a lot, but I had some problems for understand English people when spoke me, because they spoke very quickly,definitly so hard. Next year Im going back to England, exactly Derbyshire. So, I will have experience and it will be more easy. Regards!

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MY FIRST YEAR IN THE UK

 

Hello everyone.

Well, now I'm going to explain my experience in the UK.

I'm a cyclist and riding on the right is a bit difficult if you come from Spain. So, the first few days were difficult, especially at junctions.

I travelled around the UK (Durham, Wales, Glasgow, Portsmouth, Notts, Barrow...) for competitions(?) and we moved with a van. English motorways were stressful and slow but we played the "Eddie Stobar" game and the trip was (therefore) more fun.

Costa Coffee! Can you name me a place without a Costa? (They are) Everywhere!! For this reason, I went back to Spain addicted to the Americano. And tea, of course ;) And I discovered the porridge. Oh God, the best breakfast for an athlete.

I lived in Plymouth (Devon); (which is) such a beautiful place. I trained in Dartmoor Park or close to the sea.

Well, and the most difficult thing was the language. I improved a lot but I had some problems for understanding English people when they spoke to me because they spoke very quickly, it was definitely very hard.

Next year I'm going back to England, specifically Derbyshire. So, I will get more experience and it will be more easier.

Regards!

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I'm now going to explain...

I'm now going to talk about my experience...

...for competitions / ...to compete (in competitions)

Can you tell me (never "can you say me")

It's the best breakfast for...

*Be consistent with tenses ("were" difficult, we "moved", "played", I "lived" / "trained" but then: "the most difficult thing "is" the language" <-- should be "was" as you're still talking about your "past" experience)*

I'm going back to England next year...

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