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Hi, everybody! This is me...
It's my first time here. I've never been on another website like this. I'm excited and scared at the same time. I really really want to improve my English, and I thank you and appreciate your help. I've been looking for a teacher, there are so many and I don't know who choose. So, I'll have to keep looking for one for a couple more hours.
I'm a native Spanish speaker or Spanish native speaker [what's it better?] from Spain in Europe. I'm over twenty and less than thirty.
I'm studying Experimental Science in college. I haven't got a job or a part time job.
I enjoy both going to cinema and watching TV series. I like TV series like Grey's Anatomy, Scandal, Arrow, Modern Family, Once Upon a Time, etc. If you want to discuss some episodes with me , you will ask me like a friend.
I love watching soccer games especially when my team, Real Madrid, plays.
I'm delighted to be here with all of you.
Here it's time to lunch, so see you soon.
Noelia.
Hello Noelia and welcome to italki. A really nice introduction.
I have made a few corrections but you language generally appears to be of a high standard. You can use the expression 'have got' for possessions including jobs in which case have is an auxiliary. If you are going to use 'have' as a main verb then you need to use 'do' as an auxilliary. 'I don't have a job.'
There is a pattern in one sentence, actually it is two patterns joined together. The first one is 'want to + infinitive' and the second is 'discuss something with somebody'.
Hope this helps
Bob
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