Description of my family (by a man)

My family is composed consists by of my wife, my doaughter and me.

My wife's name is Rebecca and she is 25 years old. She has long brown hair and brown eyes. She is short and thin. She is a very nice person and also a lovely mother. For the moment she has stopped her studies at the university because she wants to dedicate her time to our daughter.

My daughter's name is Claudia. She was born five months ago. She is a beautiful baby with her dark brown eyes and her brown hair. She is always cheery and smiling, she is so cute.

My name is Marco and I'm 30 years old. I'm I have brown hair and brown eyes; I'm tall and thin. I'm a broker and I love my job because I travel a lot. When there are it is possibilities  possible my wife and my daughter come with me. My hobby is doing playing sports, especially the run running but since Claudia is born, I love prefer to spend my time with her.


Thanks all of you for the time that have spent to correct correcting my description. :)

Description of my family (by a man)

My family is consists of my wife, my daughter and me.

My wife's name is Rebecca and she is 25 years old. She has long brown hair and brown eyes. She is short and thin. She is a very nice person and also a lovely mother. For the moment she has stopped studying at university because she wants to dedicate her time to our daughter.

My daughter's name is Claudia. She was born five months ago. She is a beautiful baby with her dark brown eyes and her brown hair. She is always cheery and smiling, she is so cute.

My name is Marco and I'm 30 years old. I have brown hair and brown eyes; I'm tall and thin. I'm a broker and I love my job because I travel a lot. When there is a possibility, my wife and my daughter come with me. My hobby is doing sports, especially running. But since Claudia was born, I love to spend my time with her.


Thanks all of you for time that have spent correcting my description. :)

Hello Giudy,

It sounds like you have a lovely family, you are a lucky man. In the beginning you used the expression 'My family is composed by ...' This is a typical Italian mistake, the correct verb is 'consist of'. Your daught was born 5 months ago so you need to refer back to this time as 'when she was born'.

Hope this helps

Bob

Description of my family (by a man)

My family is composed by/of my wife, my daughter and me.

My wife's name is Rebecca and she is 25 years old. She has long brown hair and brown eyes. She is short and thin. She is a very nice person and also a lovely mother. For the moment she has stopped her studies at the university because she wants to dedicate her time to our daughter.

My daughter's name is Claudia. She was born five months ago. She is a beautiful baby with her dark brown eyes and her brown hair. She is always cheerful and smiling. She is so cute.

My name is Marco and I'm 30 years old. I have brown hair and brown eyes. I'm tall and thin. I'm a broker and I love my job because I travel a lot/often/frequently.

(When there are possibilities/Whenever it is possible), my wife and my daughter come with me.

My hobby is doing/playing sports, especially running. But since Claudia is born, I love to spend my time with her.


Thanks all of you for the time that have been spent to correct my description. :)

Good job!