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Grammatical corrections Perhaps I need your grammatical corrections where it is necessary on your opinion, especially with the use of articles. The use of the term ‘nano” with its appealing slogan “a micro-reality in your mobile phone” presents the main idea of the game. The game allows player to control a whole city using only a simple mobile device. The game world, where the player acts, is a world of bright colors, light tones and futuristic architecture. All buildings in the city are the buildings of the future, while most of the game processes resemble the common processes of the modern world, such as resource extraction and goods production. Player won`t face with unknown goods and notions, conversely, he will know everything, but everything will be wrapped as ‘city of the future’. The use of “Nano” in the title also allows the release of the game series with the same prefix: Nano arcade, Nano runner, Nano fighting, etc. Much thanks

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Perhaps I need your grammatical corrections where it is necessary on your opinion, especially with the use of articles.

The use of the term ‘nano” with its appealing slogan “a micro-reality in your mobile phone” presents the main idea of the game. The game allows player ('a player' or 'players') to control a whole city using only a simple mobile device. The game world, where the player acts, is a world of bright colors, light tones and futuristic architecture. All buildings in the city are the buildings of the future, while most of the game processes resemble the common processes of the modern world, such as resource extraction and goods production. Player won`t face with (be faced with) unknown goods and notions, conversely, he will know everything, but everything will be wrapped as ‘city of the future’ (not sure what you mean by this...). The use of “Nano” in the title also allows the release of the game series with the same prefix: Nano arcade, Nano runner, Nano fighting, etc.

Much thanks

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