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Short tale! A LUCKY ESCAPE Two years ago, i went with my friends in Italy, because Ada, my best friend, has got a big and beautiful house near the sea, so we decided to spend a summer in a different place. When we arrived there, we spent all day to the beach and we met a lot of people. There was a group of people who asked us to play beach volley, and thanks to them I met a nice and young boy called Michael. He was so funny and i had a lot of things in common with him, for this reason we started to go to the cinema, to the pub and also to the beach together but without our friends. One day it was an hot night and there were a lot of stars in the sky, we were drinking and speaking about our life and our travels, when he told me about a long voyage that he had done with his father, their had spend about one month in their boat, traveling from several harbours. He said that it had been the most beautiful trip that he had ever done. The story is so interesting that for this reason i wanted to take a boat and to do the same voyage, so when he asked me if i wanted to see the boat, i immediately said ‘yes’. The day after, in the morning we went in the harbour and we decided to do a short trip with his boat. I say ‘short’ because one hour later, the weather was changing, so we took the way to return at home. While we were sailing to the harbour, the weather became bad and started to rain. Firstly i thought that it was a little and boring rain, but then the water started to move in a strange way, it crashed against the boat with great strength. I was terrified for the situation, i was shoved from side to side, i tried to be quit but it was so difficult. There was a moment i don’t remember when that i saw the beach so a little light of freedom grew inside of me, but in the same moment the water pushed the boat against a cliff and i fell into the water. I was sure that i was dying when Luca took ma harm and helped me to get on the boat, than few minutes all ended. The weather returned sunny and the clouds went away from us, everything became quit. I’m sure that all those things were happened in about 15 minutes, i think that the nature tried to kill us, but at the same time it was a lucky escape. I don’t know how we returned to the beach, I just remembered the moment when i was in the boat with Michael and than all become black until about two hours later I woke up into an hospita’s room.

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Short tale!

A LUCKY ESCAPE

Two years ago, I went with my friends in to Italy, because Ada, my best friend, has got a big and beautiful house near the sea, so we decided to spend a the summer in a different place there.
When we arrived there we spent all day to on the beach and we met a lot of people.
There was a group of people who asked us to play beach volley ball, and thanks to them I met a nice, and young boy called Michael.
He was so funny and i had a lot of things in common with him, for this reason so we started to go to the cinema, to the pub and also to the beach together but without our friends on our own.

One day it was an hot warm night and when there were a lot of stars in the sky, we were drinking and speaking about our life lives and our travels, when he told me about a long voyage that he had done made with his father. their They had spent about one a month in on their boat, traveling from several harbours  to different countries. He said that it had been the most beautiful trip that he had ever made.
The His story is was so interesting that for this reason i wanted to take a boat and to do the same voyage, so when he asked me if i wanted to see the boat, i immediately said ‘yes’.

The day morning after, in the morning we went in to the harbour and we decided to do a short trip with in his boat.
I say ‘short’ because one hour later, the weather was changing began to change so we took the way to return at had to turn back home.
While Just as we were sailing in to the harbour, the weather became bad and it started to rain.
Firstly I first thought that it was only a little and boring rain, but then the water started to move in a strange way, it crashed against the boat with great strength.
I was terrified for the situation, i was shoved thrown from side to side, I tried to be quiet but it was so difficult.
There was a moment i don’t remember when that I saw the beach so and a little light of freedom hope grew inside of me, but in the same moment just then the water pushed the boat against a cliff and I fell into the water.
I was sure that I was going to drown when Luca took my arm and helped me to get back on the boat, than few minutes all ended. after a few minutes it was all over. The weather became sunny and the clouds went away from us, everything became quiet.

I’m sure that all those things were happened in about 15 minutes, I think that the nature tried to kill us, but at the same time it that we had was a lucky escape.
I don’t know how we returned to the beach, I just remember the moment when i was in the boat with Michael and then all become black until about two hours later when I woke up into an in a hospital room.

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Thanks for sharing this interesting story! But I don't like the way it ended.... it seemed like a promising romance!

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