So I hope that as you read what I wrote and correct my mistakes I would be very grateful.

First, they differ in them appearance, Ali is thin, has brown eyes and curly hair. Unlike Ali, Hassan is a little fat, has black eyes and soft hair. The second difference is the personality, Ali is witty and when he grows up he expects to have many successes. Every weekend he spends his time playing with his neighbor's children. In contrast to Ali, Hassan is always absent-minded and he is shy, so he prefers to spend his weekend playing on the ipad and watching cartoon films on YouTube alone. Those skills are the last difference between them, Ali is more skilled in using computers than Hassan, while Hassan is better at drawing than Ali, this makes Hassan the black sheep because his skill does not run in our family, unlike Ali's skill. Ali is as adventurous as Hassan. Both of them enjoy playing risky sports. Despite the great differences between them, they understand each other in an amazing way!

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So I hope that as you read what I wrote and correct my mistakes I would be very grateful.

First, they differ in them appearance, Ali is thin, has brown eyes and curly hair. Unlike Ali, Hassan is a little fat, has black eyes and soft hair. The second difference is the personality, Ali is witty and when he grow up he expect to many successes. Every weekend he spends his time playing with neighbor's children. In contrast Ali, Hassan always absent-minded and he is shy so, he prefers to spends his weekend playing in the ipad and watching carton films on YouTube alone. Them skills are the last difference between them, Ali is more skilled in "using "the use computers than Hassan, while Hassan more art in the drawing than Ali, this makes Hassan black sheep because his skill does not runs in our family unlike Ali's skill. Ali is as adventurous as Hassan. Both of them enjoy playing risky sports. Despite the great differences between them, they understand each other by"an amazing " amazing way!