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shihwei
Fighting with your weights If you want to have a diet through sports, to wear a smart bracelet will help a lot. It's good to have an indicator to tell you how many steps you have walked today and also monitor the quality of sleep. Keep walking and have a good sleep are the secret s of losing your weight quickly.

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Fighting with your weight

If you want to lose weight through sports, wearing a smart bracelet will help a lot. It's good to have an indicator to tell you how many steps you have walked today and also monitor the quality of your sleep. Walking and having a good sleep are the secrets to losing your weight quickly.

 

Hello Shihwei,

 

I can understand everything you say. I have just made a few corrections to make it read better.

 

If you are using a verb as the subject or part of the subject of a sentence, you should use the -ing form of the verb.

 

Hope this helps

 

Bob

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