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Best friend Friendship is one of the most important things in life. Life without friends is boring. Unfortunately I can't make friends easily,so I don't have many friends. As everyone , I have a best friend. I met my best friend when I was still at school. Then after finishing school we both went to continue our education in different places. But we still meet and talk anyway. I've known her for 8 years, moreover we've already become like sisters for each other. We share our secrets,joys and sorrows. But sometimes we argue because of our disagreements. We don't keep being argued for a long time though. Whenever I'm determined to do something my friend always supports me. To sum up, best friend is someone who's always by your side, who you can trust, who's always ready to help you. Finding a true friend is hard but if you've found you have to keep them because having a true friend is like having another life to make your dreams come true.

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Best *Friend

Friendship is one of the most important things in life. Life without friends is boring. Unfortunately I can't make friends easily,so I don't have many friends. *Like most people , I have a best friend. I met my best friend when I was still at school. Then after finishing school we both went to continue our education in different places, *but we still meet and talk anyway. I've known her for 8 years, moreover we've already become like sisters *to each other. We share our secrets,joys and sorrows, but sometimes we argue because of our disagreements. We don't keep *arguing for a long time though. Whenever I'm determined to do something my friend always supports me. To sum up, *a best friend is someone who *is always by your side, who you can trust, who is always ready to help you. Finding a true friend is hard but if you've found *one, you have to keep them, because having a true friend is like having another life to make your dreams come true.

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Best friend

Friendship is one of the most important things in life. Life without friends is boring. Unfortunately, I can't make friends easily, so I don't have many friends. As everyone does , I have a one best friend. I met my best friend when I was still at  in (high)school. Then, after finishing  I graduated from (high)school, we both went to continued our education in different places, but we still meet and talk keep in touch with the best friend. anyway. I've known her for 8 years; moreover, we are like sisters for  to each other. We share our secrets, joys and sorrows(nothing wrong with "secret" and "sorrow" in plural form, but since joy is an uncountable and single word, so the rest of the words in the sentence should be in single form). B , but although sometimes we argue sometimes because of our disagreements we don't see eye to eye. We don't keep being argued hold grudge for a long time though. Whenever I'm determined to do something, my friend always supports me. To sum up, best friend is someone who's always by your side, who you can trust, who's always ready to helps you out. Finding a true friend is hard, but if you've found one, you have to should keep value them because having a true friend is like having another life to make your dreams come true.

 

(keep in mind that everytime you use "for","and","nor","but","or","yet", and "so", you need to make sure the sentence the listed words connect to should be an independent sentence, and you also need to make sure there must have a comma before the listed words.)

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although sometimes we argue with each other sometimes because of our disagreements we don't see eye to eye.

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but we still meet and talk keep in touch with each other

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but we still meet and talk keep in touch with each other

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