I want to send a gift to my neighbour

Miss Sok is my neighbour, she is a warm and friendly person. I want to send a gift to her. The gift is  one of the souvenirs which l brought back,when I have had a trip to a famous town in my homeland. I hope she will like it.

Hello Sophie

Nice short text with just a few mistakes. You need to put the 'which' after the thing you are talking about as it is adding information about the thing. The past form of 'bring' is 'brought'

Hope this helps

Bob

I want to send a gift to my neighbour

Miss Sok is my neighbour. She is a warm and friendly person. I want to send a gift to her. The gift is which one of the a souvenir l broke brought back ,when I have had from a trip to the my famous town in my hometown. I hope she would will like it.

Good job Sophie! Let me know if you have questions. 

I want to send a gift to my neighbour.

Miss Sok is my neighbour, she is a warm and friendly person. I want to send a gift to her. The gift is one of the souvenirs l brought back from a trip to the famous town in my hometown. I hope she will like it.