HOW DOES THE INTERNET IMPACT ON YOUR LIFE?

This writing is my homework to for my English class. An essay with advantages and disadvantages:

Nowadays, the Internet is very present (or is ever present) on in my life, and it influences it both negatively and positively.

The main advantage is that I can watch see my cousin who lives in Germany by videoconference. Another point in favour is that I can access all kind of information whenever I need it. Also, I am be able to improve my English because there are a lot of websites where I can meet people to from other countries.

On the other hand, I usually spend a lot of time in front of the computer because the Internet lets us doing several (or many) things. And it is negative because I could do another kinds of activities like go to the theatre with my closest friends. Moreover, if I spend too much time with on the Internet, I feel my eyes very tired and it could affect my sight.

In conclusion, I must learn to enjoy the advantages of the Internet, but being aware of the time I spend. In this way, I would enjoy myself more to doing outside activities.

Very good Albita! My corrections are in red and my suggestions to sound more natural are in blue/grey.

"How does the internet impact on your life?" - You could also say "What impact does the internet have on your life?"