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Bad day
Today was troubling.
Miscommunication was the problem. Sometimes, we tend to think that we are doing what is best for the other person but this was not the case.
It got us angry eventhough we do not know much about each other.
I'll try to change my mind,but it's really difficult.
I recently talked with my friends and my family, but I got nothing out of it.
I got very upset but people still told me to go.
Maybe, later I will be fine!
I'm not sure if this is what you are trying to convey but this was the best that I could do for you.
Bad day
Today,I find our trouble.
Is communicate mood,sometime we thought we do is the best for other side,but not really.
We always angry about this,we may not know enough about each other.
I'll try to change my mind,but it's really difficult.
I recently talked with my friend and my family,but no answer.
My mood upset,but someone tell me still have to go.
Maybe later I will be fine!
Today, I found out what our problem is.
It's to communicate our mood(emotions) sometimes we think it is best for the other side(person) but it really is not.
We're always angry about this, that we may not know enough about each other.
I'll try to change my mind, but it's really difficult.
I recently talked with my friend and my family, but no answer.
My mood is upset,(i feel upset) but someone tells me I still have to go.
Maybe later I will be fine.
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I'm not sure if i corrected exactly what you were trying to say or if i may have changed your meaning but hopefully that helps.
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