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Votation day In Colombia is taking place an important date, today is the votation day, so, every Colombian attends to the polls to vote for his/her favorite candidate. Most of the people attend to vote in the morning because we think is better to do it early. A classmate, Angela is her name, made me a bet, if her candidate wins, I´ll have to give her a videogame I have, but, if my candidate wins, she´ll have to give me her favourite videogame, I think I´ll win, so this afternoon I´ll have a new game to play in my Playstation 3 system hahaha. Well, right now I´m a little dizzy because traveling by car makes me feel terrible, I have no idea why, but when I go anywhere by car I get dizzy and I hate that, therefore, when I travel I like going on my motorcycle, it´s an old motorcycle but I love it because it doesn´t get sick, plus, I can take my guitar with me and it´s an excellent plan, so, if I get bored, I play my guitar, make some of noise and fun gets again hahaha, I know it´s a madness but it´s the way as I live my life. I couldn´t attend to the polls on my motorcycle because it didn´t work, then, I had to go by car, it was a bad idea but, anyways, I was back home and it´s the matter. Oh, and I´m sure I´ll win that videogame, I´m a lucky man when I bet. Thank you for correcting my note.

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Votation Voting Day

In Colombia is taking place an important date Today is a very immportant day in Colombia. Today is the votation voting day, so, every Colombian attends travels to the polls to vote for his/her favorite candidate. Most of the people attend to vote in the morning because we think is better to do it early.
A classmate, Angela is her name, made me a bet, if her candidate wins, I´ll have to give her a videogame I have, but, if my candidate wins, she´ll have to give me her favourite videogame. I think I´ll win, so this afternoon I´ll have a new game to play in my Playstation 3 system hahaha.

Well, right now I´m a little dizzy because traveling by car makes me feel terrible. I have no idea why, but when I go anywhere by car I get dizzy and I hate that, therefore, when I travel I like going on my motorcycle. it´s an old motorcycle but I love it because it doesn´t I don't get sick, plus, I can take my guitar with me. and It´s an excellent plan, so, if I get bored, I play my guitar, make some of noise and fun. gets again Hahaha, I know it´s a madness but it´s the way as I live my life.

I couldn´t attend to the polls on my motorcycle because it didn´t work would not start., then, I had to go by car, it was a bad idea but, anyways, I was am back home and it´s I am okay the matter. Oh, and I´m sure I´ll win that videogame, I´m a lucky man when I bet.

Thank you for correcting my note.

 

Nice job Juan! I hope you win your videogame and that your political candidate wins! Let me know if you have any questions.

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Election day

Today in Colombia is an important day, election day, so, every Colombian goes to the polls to vote for his/her favorite candidate. Most of the people attend to vote in the morning because we think it is better to do it early.
A classmate, Angela is her name, made me a bet, if her candidate wins, I´ll have to give her a videogame I have, but, if my candidate wins, she´ll have to give me her favourite videogame, I think I´ll win, so this afternoon I´ll have a new game to play in my Playstation 3 system hahaha.

Well, right now I´m a little dizzy because traveling by car makes me feel terrible, I have no idea why, but when I go anywhere by car I get dizzy and I hate that, therefore, when I travel I like going on my motorcycle, it´s an old motorcycle but I love it because I don't get sick, plus, I can take my guitar with me so in case I get bored, I can play my guitar, make some noise and have some fun hahaha, I know it´s crazy but it´s the way as I live my life.

I couldn´t go to the polls on my motorcycle because it didn´t work, so, I had to go by car, it was a bad idea but, anyways, I was back home and      it´s the matter?????. Oh, and I´m sure I´ll win that videogame, I´m a lucky man when I bet.

Thank you for correcting my note.

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