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Indai lost the game against Ssouth Aafrica
Since Iindai lost the game against Ssouth Africa and not Ppakistan, then why are fans in Pakistan they so happy?. For GOD sake, be mature!, Iindia is the second fastest growing moving country among developing countries. Tthere is a huge difference discrepancy between our two contriesus [this use of "us" is okay if you know your audience is from Pakistan, and they will know "us" refers to Pakistan fans]. Even iIf Iindia is our political enemy, we do not need to take that into account in our sports. That attitude makes us appear vengeful then this behavior is not suited for revenge. [I was not positive from your last sentence exactly what you meant as your conclusion. Is this the point you trying to get across?]
India lost the game against South Africa
India lost the game against South Africa, not Pakistan. Thats why are so happy.For GOD sake be mature,India is the second fast moving country among developing countries. There is a huge discrepancy between us. If india is our enemy, then this behavior is not suited for revenge.
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