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Day-off Today was my day off. I spent all the day at home and saw a series named “Silent Separation”. The series about a love story. The Actor and Actress fell in love at College, but for some reason they separated for seven years. However, they were still love each other and finally to meet together. This is a romantic story.

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Day-off

Today was my day off. I spent (all) the whole day at home and watched (saw) a series named/called “Silent Separation”. The series is about a love story. The actor and actress fell in love whilst at college, but, for unknown (some) reasons, parted / broke up /ended their relationship. (they separated for seven years.) However, their love had never died (they were still love each other) and they finally met seven years later and rekindled their relationship. (to meet together.) This is a romantic story!

 

Nice story and well written. I have suggested a few alternative phrases you may use to describe the story. 

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Day-off

Today was my day off. I spent all the day at home and watched saw a series called named “Silent Separation”. The series is about a love story. The actor and actress fell in love at College, but for some reason they separated for seven years. However, they were still in love each other and finally to meet got together again. This is a romantic story.

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Day-off

Today was my day off. I spent all the entire day at home and watched saw a series titled named “Silent Separation”. The series was about a love story. The Actor and Actress felt fell in love at during College, but for some reasons they got separated for seven years. However, they were still love with  each other and finally to met meet together. This is a romantic story.

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Day-off

Today was my day off. I spent all the day at home and saw a series named “Silent Separation”. The series was about a love story. The actor and actress fell in love in college, but for some reason they separated for seven years. However, they still love each other and finally to get to meet each other. This is a romantic story.

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