Cruise Trip 2015

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Try to watch your use of was/were. Was is used for singular (I was), and were is used for plural (we were). Also the word I is always capitalized. Overall though your English is very good. It was very easy to follow and I had no issues at all in understanding what you were trying to say.

Here is another version with some modified sentences. I tried to avoid repeating some sentence starters as much as possible to make it read a little bit better overall.

During the recent summer break, my family and I went on a cruise ship around the Mediterranean Sea. After a brief layover in Switzerland, we drove to Genua, where we boarded the ship. Our first stop was in Napoli, Italy. I didn't really like it there that much. Everything I saw was very trashy.

Our next stop was in Messina, Sicily. Messina is much prettier than Napoli and I really liked it. After that we travelled to Valletta, Malta. We went around the island in a big round trip. The ship itself was a lot of fun. There was a swimming pool and a lot of other activities that we could do.

Our next stop was in Palma de Majorca. I liked Spain much more than Italy, everything was clean and beautiful. We then went to Barcelona, which was my favorite stop of the entire trip. We went shopping and did all of the tourist activities there. Finally, our last stop was in Marseille, France. We did some shopping there, and overall it was a nice day.