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10/24 Diary I was really annoyed today because my iPhone broke down. Can you guess why was it broken? I just used my phone around 5PM and the battery was low at that time (about 5%). I didn't have a charger, so I decided to go home and charge it. I only used music player, turning off the screen. When I was on my way to home, the battery got lower about 2%, but I don't mind. A few minutes after, my iPhone was turned off, and a few minutes after again, I arrived at home. And then, I tried to charge my iPhone. As I wait for charging, I watched the baseball game on TV. I checked my iPhone about 1 hour later, but it doesn't work. I checked the charger, but it isn't broken. I was embarrassed, so I searched on the internet. There are some articles about discharge. 'If iPhone discharged, then you might not be able to use it.' Oh my god. I must go to the service center, but now is weekend, so I have to wait for weekdays. I was really annoyed today.

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10/24 Diary

I was really annoyed today because my iPhone broke down.

Can you guess why it was broken?

I just used my phone around 5PM and the battery was low at that time (about 5%).

I didn't have a charger, so I decided to go home and charge it.

I only used music player and turned off the screen.

When I was on my way to home, the battery got lower, about 2%, but I didn't mind.

A few minutes after, my iPhone was turned off. And a few minutes after that, I arrived at home.

And Then, I tried to charge my iPhone.

As I waited for it to charge, I watched the baseball game on TV.

I checked my iPhone about 1 hour later, but it didn't work.

I checked the charger and it wasn't broken.

I was embarrassed, so I searched on the internet.

There are some articles about discharge.

"If iPhone discharged, then you might not be able to use it."

Oh my god.

I must go to the service center, but now is the weekend, so I have to wait for weekdays.

I was really annoyed today.

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