True feelings.

I don't know what I want to achieve, but I have to achieve something in my life. My friends are well settled now, they neglect me, and they don't give me any respect. They will shame me if I talk to about my dream. I believe in myself and I don't care about them. I'm getting angry, I'm committing because of them. In some ways, they are helping me reach my goal. Today we were watching a TV show. In the show, a lot of girls were singing very well. A two year-old boy sang a song very well. I got ashamed just by watching him. He managed to get a lot respect in two years and I'm a 25 year old who hasn't done anything. I like the way I am, because I'm down to earth. Sometimes incidents makes us to do something special which we have never done before.

True feelings.

I don't know what to achieve, but I have to achieve something in my life. My friends are well settled now. They neglect me and they don't give respect to me. They will shame me if I talk to about my dream. I believe in myself, so I don't care about them. I'm getting angry and I'm committing because of them. In some way they helping me to reach my goal. Today we were watching a TV show, and in the show a lot of girls were singing their very best. A small two year-old small boy sang a song very well. I got shamed by seeing him. He got all respect at two years of age, but I'm a 25 year-old and I haven't done anything. I like the way I am, because I'm down to earth. Sometimes incidents make us to do something special that we never done before.

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