Letter

Dear Mr.Byron

I am writing with regard to the advertisement published on the Niu newspaper as I would like to receive further information regarding your English course and I thank you for your patience in advance.

My current knowledge of English is B2 and since it is an upper intermediate level I have fluency both in writing and speaking English. A deeper preparation of specific grammar is needed to pass the next exam. so In particular, I would like to strengthen my securety confidence with phrasal verbs. Consequently a 6 weeks course perhaps might be advisable for my needs and I would like to have the first lesson as soon as possible, approximately around the 10th of November.

As an enthusiastic lover of sport and music, I focus on learning English with demanding and a methodic approach that I learnt by playing the piano. My main interests are reading and my favourite genre is English literature of the Georgian period.

I am available to answer to any questions, contact me in case you require additional information.

Sincerely

Penelope *****

Is needed: this is not wrong, but I would have written: "would help me to pass" 

- Max