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practice thesedays , I'm reading a book which is related Human psychology. this book is a story about how the social condition change people's acting. They show a example of this idea. Then, to prove the idea , they link this example with this idea. One of the example is Standford Prison Experiment.

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These days , I'm reading a book which is related to human psychology.
This book is a story about how the social conditions change how people act.
They show an example of this idea. Then, to prove the idea , they link an example with this idea.
One of the examples is the Standford Prison Experiment.

 

Hello Bobo,

 

Nice short text but remember to start all sentences with a capital (big) letter, learn the collocation 'related to' and pay a little more attention to articles 'a' and 'the'.

 

Hope this helps

 

Bob

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