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Requirement letter
Hi Jack,
I hope you have recovered from the journey. There’s just one thing, I need you to do me a favor. We had a wonderful trip and I’ve taken a lot of stunning shots, but one of them has been lost and I couldn’t get it back anyhow. I hope you can send a copy to me if you have it.
Specifically, it was a picture in which I was jumping up in the air with the snow-covered mountain and the sunset in the background. I really love that one because I look so handsome in it and the view in the background is fantastic. Without it, I feel like I'm missing a highly valued treasure.
How did I lose the photo? Well, I think it is not my fault. It was last night when I was trying to upload it to my Facebook account, but suddenly my computer died and I couldn’t do anything about it. As a result, I lost my files on the PC. After that, I realized computers are not reliable and I should have made several backups of my important data.
Anyway, I would be really grateful if you have a copy and could send it to me.
Look forward to hearing from you.
Hello again Peng,
Again generally fine. Nice friendly letter which I think meets the requirements. Just a few small corrections and stylistic changes.
Bob
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