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Requirement letter Hi Jack, I hope you have recovered from the journey. There’s one thing I need you to do me a favor. We have a wonderful trip and I’ve taken a lot of stunning shots, but one of them has been lost and I couldn’t get it back anyhow. I hope you can send one copy to me if you have it. Specifically, it was a picture in which I was jumping up with the snow mountain and the sunset in the back. I really love that one because I look handsome in it and the view in the background is fantastic. Without it, I feel like missing a highly valued treasure. Regarding how I lost the photo, well, I think it is not my fault. It was last night when I was trying to upload it to my Facebook account, but suddenly my computer died and I couldn’t do anything about it. As a result, I lost my files in the PC. After that, I realized computers are not reliable and I should have made several backup for my important data. Anyway, I would be really grateful if you have a copy and send it to me. Look forward to hearing from you.

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Requirement letter

Hi Jack,

I hope you have recovered from the journey. There’s just one thing,  I need you to do me a favor. We had a wonderful trip and I’ve taken a lot of stunning shots, but one of them has been lost and I couldn’t get it back anyhow. I hope you can send a copy to me if you have it.

Specifically, it was a picture in which I was jumping up in the air with the snow-covered mountain and the sunset in the background. I really love that one because I look so handsome in it and the view in the background is fantastic. Without it, I feel like I'm missing a highly valued treasure.

How did I lose the photo? Well, I think it is not my fault. It was last night when I was trying to upload it to my Facebook account, but suddenly my computer died and I couldn’t do anything about it. As a result, I lost my files on the PC. After that, I realized computers are not reliable and I should have made several backups of my important data.

Anyway, I would be really grateful if you have a copy and could send it to me.

Look forward to hearing from you.

 

Hello again Peng,

 

Again generally fine. Nice friendly letter which I think meets the requirements. Just a few small corrections and stylistic changes.

 

Bob

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