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Please, correct it. I would like to tell you the story of my desperate experience. It would be somewhat funny but a sad story at a time. well, here it goes. I used to enjoy playing games in the internet especially in the facebook or whatever. I had communicated with players through the chatting. Typing and reading are pretty much hard to catch up their commands what they wanted me to do and what I wanted them to react. Whole communications are proceeded in English chatting when we are playing.

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Please, correct it.

I would like to tell you the story of a desperate experience of mine.
It is somewhat funny, but sad at the same time.
Well, this is how it goes.
I used to enjoy playing games on the internet, especially on Facebook and orhwr things like that. I had communicated with players through the chatting.
Understanding what they want me to do and telling them what I want is often hard. Full conversations are used in English chatting when we are playing.

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Please, correct it.

I would like to tell you the story of my desperate experience.
It would will be somewhat funny, but sad story at the same time.
Well, here it goes:
I used to enjoy playing games on the internet, especially on the Facebook or whatever. I had communicated with players through the online-chatting.
**Typing and reading are pretty much hard to catch up their commands what they wanted me to do and what I wanted them to react. Whole communications are proceeded in English chatting when we are playing. 

 

**It sounds better to say, "It was hard to keep up when reading their commands and understanding what they wanted me to do. It was hard getting them to understand how I wanted them to react as well. Alll of the communications are done in English when we are playing." 


Very good! I do not play video games online, but I could see how the language-differences might be a problem

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