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Our Costums: ''Las Corridas de Toros''
In Spain ''Las Corridas de Toros'' is still a popular custom and very much alive tradition alive where a man or a woman (this is not typical) plays(?) in front of a bull.
Esta es una oración muy compleja en Inglés y se escribiría así:
In Spain ''Las Corridas de Toros'' is still a popular and very much alive tradition, where a man or a woman (this is not typical), play in front of a bull.
Nowadays, there are two positions/points of view about this customs due to our evolution.
Evolution no suena muy bien pero no se me ocurre otra idea por el momento.
Animal defenders say it is an abuse considering that bull is injured. Nevertheless However, conservative people think the opposite, that it is art. What do you think about this?
Al usar however, no se necesita, "the opposite" ya que however hace ese contraste automaticamente.
La diferencia entre Nevertheless and However es muy sútil; en tu caso, suena mejor however, pero este es un articulo que explica la diferencia. Está escrito en inglés:
http://www.differencebetween.com/difference-between-however-and-vs-nevertheless/
The use of both however and nevertheless expresses surprise, but however is able to convey contrast as well as concession, and nevertheless presents an idea of concession. This allows one to make use of however in place of nevertheless in all situations.
For Spain this festival attracts a lot of tourists and money, son it can be profitable to the country. This costum/tradition is spended has been celebrated in Spain for more than 50 years and therefore/that is why it is very difficult become for it to dissapear.
This tradition has been celebrated in Spain for more than 50 years and that is why it is very difficult for it to dissappear.
Esta tradición ha sido celebrada en España desde hace 50 años y es por eso que es muy díficil que desaparezca.
On the other hand, the bull suffers in this game. Also, the man who plays in this tradition could also die due to the bull, which always is dangerous.
Also the man who plays in this tradition could also die due to the dangerous bull.
In my view, men and bulls are animals and no one should suffer because we are intelillent and we can change the customs and traditions for other ones which are more respecful. The Men mustshouldn't fight versus a bull without violence and death. (a esta oración le falta algo; no siente completa, yo diría, Men shouldn't fight versus a bull because of the violence and death).
''Las Corridas de Toros'' could be amazing until you see to die the death of the a bull or a the man. Now you can choose whether it is art or abuse.
In Spain “Las Corridas de Toros” is a popular cultural tradition where a man or a woman (though this is not typical) plays/performs in front of a bull. Nowadays, there are two positions about this custom due to our country´s evolution over time.
Animal rights defenders say the practice is an abuse because the bull is injured/harmed. Nevertheless traditional people think the opposite, that it is art. What do you think about this?
For Spain this festival attracs a lot of tourists and money so it can be profitable for the country. This custom has been practiced in Spain for more than 50 years and so it is not easy to get rid of.
On the other hand, the bull suffers in this game. Also, there is always the danger that the man who performs could die being attacked by the bull.
In my view men and bulls are both animals and neither should suffer because we are intelligent and we can change these customs and traditions for something more respectful. The man shouldn´t fight the bull using/with violence leading to death.*
“Las Corridas de Toros” could be amazing/exciting until you see the bull or the man die. Now you can choose whether this is art or abuse.
* Ana I´ve changed this sentence quite a bit, I´m hoping my interpretation is what you had in mind ;)
You have done great work. Its a difficult subject and the points you raise are very valid. I have made some grammar changes and also some changes to choice of words so it sounds more natural to a native speaker.
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