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San Francisco
I used to study in San Francisco. It wasn't a long period of time but it was very significant. I had never wanted to go to the USA before. But I had to go to study a song which changed my life. I came back to Russia one year ago. I am totally miss my friends and California. I hope to visit them again.
Hello Anna,
Just a few small errors, we often use an infinitive of purpose to answer the question why. I went to SF to study a song
Hope this helps
Bob
San Francisco
I used to study in San Francisco. It wasn't a long period of time but it was very significant. I never wanted to go to the USA before. But I had to go for studying the song that changed my life. I came back to Russia one year ago. I deeply miss my friends and California. I hope I can visit them again.
I am not sure of having understood the sense of the sentence about your song...
I hope you can get back again.
Well done! Regards.
If you will paraphrase the following sentence in English, or write in in Russian, I will come back to to check it: "But I should for my studying song it changed my life.
Do you mean you had to come to the US to study song (singing) (чтобы учиться пению)? If so, maybe you meant to say, "But I had to go there in order to study singing, and that changed my life."
San Francisco
I used to study in San Francisco. It wasn't long period of time but it was very significant. I never wanted to go to the USA before. But I should for my studying song it changed my life. I back to Russia one year ago. I am totally miss my friends and California. I hope to visit them again.
San Francisco
I used to study in San Francisco. It wasn't long period of time but it was very significant. I never wanted to go to the USA before. But I should for my studying and it changed my life. I back to Russia one year ago. I am totally miss my friends and California. I hope to visit them again.
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