Questions about me

Here are some questions that I must answer. Please, help me!

"Hello, Leonardo. Talk about you"

"- Well, what do you know, my name is Leonardo, I'm twenty three, I'm an electrical engineering student, I've been cursing 7 th period (I'm not sure what you want to say here--cursing means to say bad words), I go to the Universidade do Rio de Janeiro. I live with my mom. I have (In American English we don't write "I've" when we want to say "I have something", only if it is part of a longer verb, like "I have been to Brazil" would be "I've been to Brazil". In British English you might write it as you did above, but it's more of a spoken thing) a sister and her name is Larissa, she (no need for the word "already" here) as worked in the White Martins." (Do you mean the White Mountains? In New Hampshire?)

"What do you do spend time?"

"("Sincerely" can't be used here. It is mostly used to end a letter, as in "Sincerely, Rodrigo" or you can also say "She spoke very sincerely". But not to mean "Honestly", which is what you want here, I think.) I really like to learn new things and travel to places where I can be closer to nature".

"How long have you been studying English?"


"- I've been studying English for two years, and since February of 2015 (we never write out the words for years), I've dedicated every day to improving"


"Have you already travel to other Country?"

"- Not yet. But I am very interested in visiting the USA and Europe. Maybe one day..."

"Do you have girlfriend?"

"-Yes. (In English, we never answer a question with just a verb. You need the direct object--what do you have?) Her name is Jessica. We have been together for three years".

"How old is She? What do she do?"

"-She's twenty three years old. She's working with handicraft and selling jewelry". She's has a micro-enterprise." (You can say "own a micro-enterprise, but it's not so common here. It would be more common to say "She's a small business owner" or "She is an entrepreneur")

"What do you think about your future personal/academic?"

"- I think about working somewhere that I feel good, getting a good salary and a excellent plan of carrier." (I don't know what this last phrase means--what do you want to say with "a good carrier"?)

"Have you interest in to participate from exchange (travel for other country) or some thing similar?

" - I am interested to get fluent in English some way that I can get contact all day with the language, be it through people, phone calls, e-mails or any other way of communication. Today, my priority is my academics and fluency in English, because I know that exist one world behind the wall of this language." (What exists behind the wall? I don't understand)

Nice job overall! You express yourself very nicely. The things I changed are small things to make your English sound more fluent.