I like autumn

As summer is gone, autumn comes along. It's getting cool and not hot. During this season, I like to walk around in the park, ride a bicycle in the country, have a picnic with my family, etc. The weather is comfortable to anything so I won't be sweating like I would in the heat of the summer sun. When I walk on the street, listening the voice of nature, I feel how beautiful this life is!

(Just remember that the comma "," is ALWAYS at the end of the first word it's in between!
Example: Today, October 21, 2015, is my friend's birthday!

You see how it's always at the end of the first word it's in between?

Also, don't overuse commas! They're just used as a brief pause in a sentence. Try to say the sentence in your head before you put the comma.~~~

And don't forget to capitalize the first letter of each new sentence!!!

I like autumn

As summer is gone, autumn comes,it's getting cool and not hot. At During this season I like to walk around in the park, ride a bicycle in the countryside, or have a picnic with my family if the weather allows it! ,etc. The weather is comfortable to anything,i won't be sweating and hard to or suffering with the heat of the summer sun. When I walk on the street, listening to the voice of nature, I feel how beautiful the live life is!

I love autumn too! I love to see the trees changing colour, it is really beautiful! Unfortunately though, it also starts to rain alot in England! :-)