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at the ba.. A couple of girls got into the bar a few weeks ago, I went to their table to take their order. A pretty intense song called "patria de mierda" was sounding in the background and one of the girls went like "could you please turn off that song"? It is scary, she said. So I go like sure, so what would you like to listen to instead? She goes, do you have some bachata? To which I instantly replied "sorry, we don't play that kind of thing here" This is a Rock bar and is totally different to all the bars around here, then another girl looked at me and went like, what about the sing "the costumer is always right" I carefully told her, well! That's the truth but not in most of the cases as you all see, the place goes about culture and music, therebefore I couldnt play it for you. Im really sorry. at the end some of them told me, okay you should program some of ACDC to which fits into the kind of bar we are in. We all know that people do not have the same music taste of us, but we are pretty opend-minded and don't go into other places asking to change the mainstream music they play, just because we dont like it. Alright...

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at the bar..

A couple of girls got into the bar a few weeks ago, I went to their table to take their order. A pretty intense song called "patria de mierda" was sounding in the background and one of the girls went like/said "could you please turn off that song? It is scary." she said. So I go like sure, so what would you like to listen to instead? She goes, do you have some bachata? To which I instantly replied "sorry, we don't play that kind of thing here"

This is a Rock bar and is totally different to all the bars around here, then another girl looked at me and went like, what about the sign "the costumer is always right". I carefully told her, well! That's the truth but not in most of the cases as you all see, the place is about culture and music, that's why I couldnt play it for you. Im really sorry. at the end one of them told me, okay you should program some of ACDC which fits into the kind of bar we are in. We all know that people do not have the same music taste of us, but we are pretty opend-minded and don't go into other places asking to change the mainstream music they play, just because we dont like it. Alright...

It's mostly correct, casual style, but correct.

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