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Returning to College Getting back to college was my main goal since long time ago. I went to college in Puerto Rico and graduated with a bachelor degree in Business Administration in 2006, but two years after I moved to New York. Moving to New York it was very hard for me. It was like started all over because I did not know English at all. It was like having nothing, because even though my resume state that I have a bachelor in Business Administration the fact that I did not speak English made my bachelor useless. Now after seven years of living in New York I want to return to college to get a Master Degree. Even though I can have a conversation in English I still do not feel confident of my writing skills. That is the main reason why I decided to sing up to italki.com. I would appreciate any corrections or suggestions that you make to my post. Also if you have any suggestions on how I can improve my writing skills I would appreciate as well.

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Returning to College

Going back and attending college was my main goal since a long time ago. I attended college in Puerto Rico and graduated with a bachelor degree in Business Administration in 2006, however this was two years after I moved to New York. Moving to New York, it was very difficult for me. It was like starting all over because I did not know any English at all. It was like having nothing, because even though my resume stated that I had a bachelor in Business Administration, the fact that I did not speak English made my bachelor useless. Now after seven years of living in New York, I want to return to college to get a Master's Degree. Even though I can have a conversation in English, I still do not feel confident in my writing skills. This is the main reason why I decided to sign up on italki.com. I would appreciate any corrections or suggestions that you could make to my post. Also, if you have any suggestions on how I can improve my writing skills, I would appreciate that as well.

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Thank you very much Cameron. I appreciated your corrections and your comment. I definitely will take your advise.
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Your writing skills are spectacular! All you need to work on is slightly improving your grammar and you will be writing perfectly! Great job man!

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