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My report about a film festival There is going to be a film festival in your area. Write a report for the organisers explaining why the festival is a good idea and what films might be popular. Say what the organisers need to do to make sure lots of people attend the festival. “Main reasons to organize a good film festival” by José Antonio The aim of this report is to explain to the organisers why the film festival is a fantastic idea and what type of films might be popular. Furthermore, I have asked some citizens their opinion and their likes and dislikes about different films. The interview with the clients said the following: -They love the romantics and the comedys films, but they are sick of thriller. -They prefer shorts films than long films and they hate the films with too much casting because they have a mess. -Apart of the film, it would be convenient to contact with a famous actor because that would be a extra motivation for them and it also intesresting to roganize some events before the date, even some activity with children, because a lot of people thought it could be a good idea if some children knew some cartoon films. I observed that they were very interested in spanish actors and actress, so it could be a good idea if they found some sourprised when they arrived to the festival. Also there were a couple of clients who said that it could be a a good idea the publicity for all the area because the more people know it, the more people come to the festival. In light of the above, I recomend distribute advertising, including the following ítems: -Number of films proyected in the festival -Date and hour and events before films proyections. -The actors and actrees whose will attent to the film festival. In conclussion, I think the most important thing is to distribute the publicity with a differents ítems and to contact with some actor or actrees whose are able to sign some autographs because that is very atractive to many people.

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Hi Bob! I am practising for TRINITY COLLEAGE....ISE II (B2) and I know I have to write a meaningful in each paragraph... but I was not sure about that....what do you think about that Bob? Thanks in advance.
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Jose, this text does not follow the standard outline for a report. In a report each paragraph/section will have a meaningful title. ie it explains what will be in the section. Be careful about using bullet points as they can restrict your language. Which exam are you practising for? Bob

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