City Life
Today I was very busy, I finished my work until 21:30. On my way home by subway,I got a call from my mom, she has been my hometown almost a month,I miss she very much.Althought she is not with us but she looks very happy, becase the city life is very noisy, she doesn't like living in the here.
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City Life
Today I've been very busy, I finished my work until 21:30. On my way home by subway,I got received a call from my mom, she has been in my hometown almost a month and I miss her very much. Althought she is not with us but she looks very happy, because the city life is very noisy, she doesn't like living in the here.
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City Life
Today I was/have been very busy, and I did not finished my work until 21:30. On my way home by subway, I got a call from my mom. She has been in my hometown almost a month, and I miss she her very much. Althought she is not with us, but* she looks very happy, because the city life* is very noisy, and she doesn't like living in the here.
*you don't need 'but' because you have already used 'although'
* 'city life' or 'life in the city'
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The City Life
Today, I was very busy, I finished my work until 21:30. On my way home by subway,I got a call from my mom, she has been my hometown sjnce almost a month,I miss her very much.Althought she is not with us but she looks very happy, becase the city life is very noisy, she doesn't like to living here.
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