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Visiting Rome Rome, capital of Italy. It is one of the most beautiful cities in the world. I spent a week there. We rented an apartment on the outskirts. Walk through the Roman Forum and the Coliseum at sunset was something I will never forget. The underground was our means of transportation to visit the most important monuments, basilicas, museums and palaces. Last week we visit Pisa, Lucca, Siena, Florence in just four days. Too many places, too many hours on the train. It took me several days to feel good. I am a little tired of so much art. My next trip I hope to be in a good hotel with spa. Go for a run and just enjoy the nature.

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Visiting Rome

Rome, capital of Italy. It is one of the most beautiful cities in the world. I spent a week there. We rented an apartment on the outskirts. Walking through the Roman Forum and the Coliseum at sunset was something I will never forget.
The underground was our means of transportation to visit the most important monuments, basilicas, museums and palaces.
Last week we visited Pisa, Lucca, Siena, Florence in just four days. Too many places, too many hours on the train.
It took me several days to feel good. I am a little tired of so much art.
My next trip I hope to be in a good hotel with spa. Go for a run and just enjoy the nature.

 

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Visiting Rome

Rome, the capital of Italy. It is one of the most beautiful cities in the world. I spent a week there (*:a specific time needed, otherwise you should use Perfect Tense). We rented an apartment on the outskirts of Rome/of the city. Walking through the Roman Forum and the Coliseum Colloseum at sunset was something I will never forget.
The underground was our means of transportation to visit the most important monuments, basilicas, museums and palaces.
Last week we visited Pisa, Lucca, Siena, Florence in just four days. Too many places, and too many hours on the train.
It took me several days later to feel good (*or: recover). I am a little tired of so much art.
My next trip I hope to be in a good hotel with spa in which I can (simply) gGo for a run and just enjoy the nature. (*: actually not very logical/connecting because a good hotel and a run in the nature are not neccesarily together ;) )

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